Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: all I want to do is please you dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: anguished_child
    ASL Info:    16/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 69/51/57
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 502



    Description:
       how I want my love to feel


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsall I want to do is please you dots
    -------------------------------------------


    All I want to do is please you make you feel on top of the world and just totally make feel untouchable. I want to turn your frown upside down so that I can see your beautiful smile. I want to please you in every way that I can. all I want is to hold you all night long and tell you that your my perfect angel that you are the most important thing in my life because you are and i know that I'm not perfect but I try my best to be for you.
    I love you baby always and forever
    Darrell




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 14:35:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      omg ok ive read a couple of ur poems and can i just say u sound to me like the best bf any one could ever want..sorry just had to tell u....this was a very wonderful poem i can c how in love u are. keep up the amazing work

    _tayla_ aka SickOfHurting U
    | Posted on 2008-08-29 00:00:00 | by SickOfHurting U | [ Reply to This ]
      These are your earnest and ardent feelings. These feelings should be embellished by giving these lines a rhythmic form and make this a ditty.
    | Posted on 2008-04-26 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.