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    dots Submission Name: ** Promise Landdots
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    Author: sandman
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 1486/1368/564
    Words: 613
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dots** Promise Landdots
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    Pause for a moment
    the moment that it takes
    To make you Smile

    My time, Twists, another memory
    close your eyes as I unlock the door
    and I sing,

    remind me, of a time,
    you once had
    when a lonesome dove
    had come to sing

    Sounds so pretty
    when the doves cry
    their cry of love.
    It starts with a flutter
    a memory of love.

    Times clock chimes!
    Heaven sent far above

    A withered sunrise
    lies beyond, this journey
    In my generations
    time has taken me
    lost in the eyes of society

    Love taken for granted and or
    loss to human ignorance
    of then and now
    Talking from the other side of me
    these memories and moments
    soothe our soul’s fire

    Sounds so pretty
    the voice of a dove
    sing from me a melody
    of your heart

    Fly high to the sky
    Stand outside yourself and sing
    look inside to the spirit
    that takes you onward
    to challenge yourself
    and finish your journey

    Time never tells
    what lies ahead of us?
    Heaven or so they say
    is beyond the clouds

    Say your prayers
    Oh beautiful one
    White as snow and gracefully play
    to a better place in my soul

    Life they say is all but a dream
    When you die you then awaken
    to take your journey onward

    The gates of hell open
    A sinner or a soldier
    that’s lost their pride are taken
    to stand alone in darkness

    The wheels of life keep turning
    faster and deeper into darkness
    Once in silence, the deeper your fall
    into the spirit world of your new tomorrow

    When you crossover
    so many people are caught
    by the promise of the promise land
    Pay the preacher
    as you rise above the rest

    Never knowing how to get there
    other than dying
    Life has so many challenges
    to many choices to learn from

    Remember the faces of your loved ones
    one too many questions
    go unanswered to and from
    my days with Christ

    Once again here I am freestanding
    In the eyes of Jesus
    Lost you once a time or two ago
    Fly high, fly free
    My dove and caress me
    With our beautiful song

    Walk with me as I stand
    In the face of a free man
    lost my soul’s harp
    when wandering outside my body

    A fallen son
    in the eyes of my peers
    Sandman found me walking
    in the sands of death

    We talked to Jesus
    the one who carried me, across this desert
    take me once, take me twice
    my old friend, I’ve awaken

    Many years I’ve been
    Pushing that stone from the hill
    my Celtic cross
    bares no other than my name

    Windswept secrets
    my death’s dove sings from me
    sounds so pretty!

    Caress
    the picture that life
    has created inside of me

    Death’s door opened
    I’ve answered its calling
    once, twice maybe one other

    Restless thoughts stir my slumber
    when I wander back in time
    my beast is running
    to consume my dove

    The devil turns me ignorant to love
    scorn me! burn me!
    my dove is crying
    from inside my soul

    Sounds so pretty
    no love song ever written
    sounds like this
    When a dove cries
    with no vocals

    A gift of life
    given me at my crossroads
    of wandering, to and from death’s door

    A dove’s soul
    the spirit of a man
    buried by the Kings
    of the promise land
    has returned
    to leave you these memoirs!




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 14:53:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Thanks, Sandman. That was the most beautiful poem, I have ever read.

    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      Good poem, normally I get distracted when reading long poems (even my own). This one I didn't however; it also reminded me a little of Jim Morrison's writtings.
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by Nicholas Lala | [ Reply to This ]



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