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    dots Submission Name: PROTECTIONdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Bytes: 199



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    dotsPROTECTIONdots
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    I cry out in despair
    You come running,
    Arms open, ready
    To protect me from the world.
    If only you knew
    That it's myself
    I need protection from.




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 17:03:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh.
    I have a teddy bear that was gift from my ex.. I still keep it with me and often cuddle it...

    I am too old to be doing that... but its just as you have mentioned here....

    small work, that is how abstracts are supposed to be
    | Posted on 2008-05-01 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]


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