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    dots Submission Name: I'LL NEVER WINdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI'LL NEVER WINdots
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    So many questions
    So little time
    Sometimes I ask
    Am I loosing my mind?
    So many decisions
    I know I can't make
    So much criticism
    I simply just can't take.
    I can't please everyone
    Though I always will try.
    Sometimes I get discouraged
    But I don't know why!
    I hate all the pressures
    That are brought upon me.
    Too many decisions
    That I'd rather there be
    I just can't stand it
    Don't know what to do
    To feel what I feel...
    ...if only you knew
    I'm not looking for sympathy
    I just wish it would end.
    But I feel it's a battle
    That I'll never win.




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 17:04:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      that right there sums up my life. thank you for putting it in words for me.
    | Posted on 2008-04-25 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]


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