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    dots Submission Name: WHEN YOU CRYdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 248
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 668
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1618



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    dotsWHEN YOU CRYdots
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    When you're alone
    And nobody's there to take you through the night
    Oh when nothing's right
    Call out my name
    Don't be ashamed to say you need a hand
    I understand. Baby
    Sometimes the night can be so dark and cold
    No one beside you
    And no one to hold
    Hold on, hold on

    When you cry
    I will dry your eyes
    When you fall
    I'll lift you up high
    You just reach
    For these arms of mine
    I promise they won't let you go
    And I'll make you smile
    When you cry

    You're always strong
    Always got a hand to lend to someone else
    Don't need no one else
    What about those times
    When that heart inside is crying out for love
    For someone. Baby
    Someone to lean on when the tears start to fall
    Lean on me and I'll see you through it all
    Hold on, hold on...

    When you cry
    I will dry your eyes
    When you fall
    I'll lift you up high
    You just reach
    For these arms of mine
    I promise they won't let you go
    And I'll make you smile
    When you cry

    Hold on to me
    When you're not feeling strong
    Hold on, hold on

    When you cry
    I will dry your eyes
    When you fall
    I'll lift you up high
    You just reach
    For these arms of mine
    I promise they won't let you go
    And I'll make you smile
    When you cry





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