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    dots Submission Name: Listendots
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    Author: lolavie
    ASL Info:    23/female/Michigan
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 70/175/103
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsListendots
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    After the rain starts falling
    I swear I hear your name
    drip drops are falling, falling
    againsts my window pain

    I feel youre somewhere out there
    Are you behind the moon?
    The wind sneaks in to tell me
    to still have faith in you

    though i dont see you,think i never will
    i need to believe youre everything i ever wanted
    I wont give, I never will
    til I see you I'll listen the rain




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