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    dots Submission Name: can you hear a beating heart??dots
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    Author: love_confusion
    ASL Info:    15/f/ct
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 4/19/23
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 83
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    all the words you said to me, all the words you never meant
    all the gifts you gave to me, all the gifts i threw away
    you left me with a broken heart, you left me all alone but
    deep within my soul, lies a flame that will forever burn
    yet even with a broke heart my heart keeps beating two,
    two rythms only meant for one, that one is simply you

    (and can you hear a beating heart calling out your name
    whispering repeatedly all the words you use to say
    can u hear it's broken rythm missing its other half, telling you
    the heart you broke and all your awful lies)

    all the broken promises forgotten, all happy moments gone
    memories soon erased, from this awful moment in the past
    but i guess you deserve a "thank-you" for you changed me in a way
    im not as weak as before, im not so easily swayed
    for my heart learned to protect itself from the liars and the players
    it build a barriar that is well put together

    (and can you hear a beating heart, the other half of the first one
    can you hear its rythm slow, telling you that you dont matter anymore
    telling you, you made it strong, it aint as weak as the first time
    can you hear a beating heart, telling you its final goodbyes)....?




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