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    dots Submission Name: Chi Chapter 11dots
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    Author: FinalConflict
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       Chapter 11 of Chi.


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    dotsChi Chapter 11dots
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    Chapter 11: Makoto vs. Nato:


    Nato: Well fine….if you wanna disappoint me like that…
    Makoto: Well when you put it like that….
    Nato: …
    Makoto: I don’t like to disappoint people.
    Makoto’s gloves fall to the ground.
    Makoto looks up: So tell me….will this please you?
    Nato: ?
    Nato: !
    Makoto appears behind Nato.

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    Makoto’s gloves hit the ground:...will this please you?
    Nato: !
    Makoto appears behind Nato.
    Makoto punches Nato in the face.
    Nato, kneeling: Not bad.
    Nato stands up.
    Nato runs at Makoto.
    Makoto punches at Nato.
    Nato kicks Makoto in the chin and up in the air.
    Nato spin kicks Makoto in the stomach and sends him flying backwards.
    Nato thrusts his hand out and an earth spike shoots up at Makoto.
    Makoto’s arms glow green, an Earth wall shoots up and blocks the earth spike.
    Nato: Without when motioning….interesting…
    Makoto hit’s the ground and skids.
    Makoto bites the tip of his thumb.
    Makoto thought: He’s good. But nothing I can’t get around.
    Makoto gets up.
    Makoto: You ready?
    Nato: Hmph.
    Makoto disappears and re-appears every few feet but then immediately disappears again.
    Makoto appears, holding the collar of Nato’s shirt.
    Nato looking unimpressed.
    Makoto throws Nato in the air.
    Makoto swipes his arms twice and his arms glow green.
    Six earth spikes shoot up at Nato surrounding him from all directions.
    Nato disappears.
    Nato appears with a knife to Makoto’s throat.
    Makoto: !
    Nato: I could kill you…at any moment…
    Makoto: Heh-heh…
    Makoto sinks into the ground.
    Nato: What!
    Makoto sinks out of the ground behind Nato.
    Makoto: So can I….
    Shows Makoto’s eyes, his eye’s are completely empty, like Masashi’s were.
    Nato dives forward.
    Nato swipes his arm.
    An earth pillar shoots up at Nato’s chest.
    Nato grabs it with his hands.
    It shoots up and spins him incredibly fast.
    The pillar stops and Nato shoots high in the air still spinning very fast.
    Nato thought: Earth Spike Barrage!
    Hundreds of Earth spikes shoot out from the blur of Nato(because he’s spinning so fast) at Makoto.
    Makoto thought: !
    Makoto’s arms glow green and he raises his hands so they’re level with his face.
    Makoto slams his hands against the ground.
    A very large wall of Earth shoots up out of the ground.
    The spikes bounce off the wall.
    Nato stops spinning.
    Nato punches at the wall.
    Nato punches straight through the wall(Makoto: !!!)
    Makoto backflips on his hands three times.
    Makoto skids.
    Makoto’s eyes open wide.
    Nato is in front of him.
    Nato punches Makoto twice in the face.
    Nato grabs Makoto’s shirt and throws him backwards.
    Nato slashes his arm out.
    A small earth spike shoots up and goes through Makoto’s shoulder.
    Makoto: Ah!
    Makoto hit’s the ground, bleeding.
    Makoto thought: Damn…he’s too good.
    Nato grabs the back of Makoto’s shirt.
    Nato throws Makoto in the air.
    Nato presses his hands against the ground.
    Four earth spikes shoot up from the ground.
    Makoto holds his hands out and an Earth wall forms in front of him.
    The spikes shoot through the earth wall.
    Makoto thought: No!
    Makoto is grazed by the four earth spikes(the side of the leg, side of the upper torso, side of the lower torso, and side of the right cheek).
    Makoto hit’s the trunk of a tree and hits the ground.
    Nato: See…I knew you’d be no match for me.
    Makoto on the ground thought: Damn! He’s too good…too strong…my defenses can’t hold…
    Nato: Get up…face the end like a man!
    Makoto looks at the tape on his hands(running up to his bicep).
    Nato: Stand your ground!
    Makoto grits his teeth.
    Nato: Don’t be a coward!
    Makoto bites his lip.
    Nato: Stand up and fight!
    Makoto’s lip starts bleeding.
    Nato: Are you a weakling!?
    Makoto rising: No!!!!!!!!!
    Nato: Heh…good…now….you may face your end with honor.
    Makoto thought: How can I fight him…his strength…his power…
    Nato starts walking towards Makoto.
    Makoto thought: I guess I have to…
    Nato takes out a knife.
    Makoto: Stay where you are?
    Nato: ?
    Makoto: The fight begins now…
    Nato: What?
    Makoto thought: So it’s come to this…
    Makoto thought: Forgive me Father….
    Makoto grabs the tape on his hands(with both hands) thought: But to beat him…
    Makoto starts to peel it off(just a tiny bit on each hand) thought: I must do this….
    Makoto slashes his arms down and the tape flies off and circulates his arms.
    Makoto: Nato….
    Nato: Hm?
    Makoto: You are about to die…a most painful death….
    Nato: !

    (End of 2nd Volume)




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