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    dots Submission Name: Chi Chapter 12dots
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    Author: FinalConflict
    Elite Ratio:    0.89 - 0/0/12
    Words: 697
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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       Chapter 12 of Chi.


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    dotsChi Chapter 12dots
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    Chapter 12: Hikoro and Rakura

    Nato: What the hell are you talking about?
    Makoto: Not once…since that day…have I taken this tape off…
    Nato: …
    Makoto: Not once…did I ever think I would need to…but…
    Makoto: It seems like my only option now…
    Nato: What are you talking about…
    Makoto: Sako the Hermit…came in contact with me when I was younger…and embedded in my two arms…one half of the sacred jewel, Cray, in each arm…such power inside that jewel. That I have to keep my arms heavily taped, and gloved, to protect everyone close to me from getting hurt.
    Nato: Heh…well bring it on…

    (Shows Chapter Page)

    Makoto: Your going to wish you didn’t say that.
    Nato: Heh…am I?
    Makoto: I just said you were…what are you deaf?
    Nato: What did you say!?
    Makoto: I’ll take that as a yes.
    Nato: Enough child’s play! Let’s finish this!
    Makoto: As you wish.
    Makoto takes a step.
    The earth shakes.
    Makoto takes another step.
    The earth shakes more and starts shooting up in spikes in random directions.
    Nato: !!!
    Makoto runs at Nato and a huge wall of Earth follows.
    Nato swipes his arm.
    An earth spike shoots at the wall of earth and cracks and breaks before it gets close.
    Nato thought: Such power!
    Makoto slashes his arm out: AH!!!!!
    Shows blood flying.
    Shows Nato, covered in blood and slashed and stabbed, stuck to an Earth wall.
    Makoto sighs.
    Makoto: I told him.
    Makoto grabs the tape.
    Makoto starts putting the tape back on.
    (Shows the sky)

    Hikoro panting.
    Rakura panting.
    Rakura: Not bad for a kid.
    Hikoro: You haven’t seen anything yet.
    Rakura: I hope not…well I’m sure everyone else is finished by now…so let’s wrap things up as well.
    Hikoro: Fine…
    Spiritual energy forms around Rakura’s hands and then forms into a sword.
    Rakura holds the sword in front of him.
    Hikoro: …
    Rakura runs at Hikoro.
    Rakura slashes the sword down.
    Hikoro jumps back and dodges the sword by about a foot.
    Hikoro is cut across the chest.
    Hikoro: What!
    Hikoro skids.
    Hikoro thought: I dodged it! What’s going on?
    Rakura: Heh. This sword is so spiritually tough that…it cuts anything that gets too close to it.
    Hikoro thought: Damn! As if I didn’t have enough of a disadvantage…I can’t nullify any of his attacks and now I can’t get close to him!
    Shows Rakura holding the sword thought: That just leaves one thing….
    Shows Hikoro’s hand: Rasendou…
    Hikoro looks focused thought: Right!
    Hikoro grabs his shoulder and thrusts his left hand back.
    Wind circulates his hand rapidly.
    Rasendou forms.
    Shows Hikoro holding Rasendou.
    Rakura thought: Interesting….a child like him…mastering a move of that level. He’s quite something.
    Hikoro: Let’s finish this!
    Rakura thought: ….And brave as well.
    Rakura: As you wish.
    Rakura runs at Hikoro.
    Hikoro thought: This may be it….
    Hikoro runs at Rakura.
    Hikoro thrusts his arm out.
    Rakura swings the sword.
    Hikoro starts to get cut.
    Hikoro: Ahhh….dammit!!!!
    Hikoro closes his eyes.
    Hikoro thought: Suna….
    Shows Rakura swinging the sword down thought: Chi…..
    Hikoro opens his eyes (they are empty like Masashi’s)
    Hikoro disappears.
    Hikoro appears behind Rakura and the Rasendou hits Rakura’s back and causes a huge explosion thought: RYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Hikoro leans up against a tree.
    Hikoro sighs.
    Hikoro: I wonder how everyone else is doing…
    Shows rustling in the bushes next to Hikoro.
    Hikoro: Heh….that was fast.
    Shows Makoto holding his bleeding shoulder: Yo!
    Hikoro: You look pretty beat up.
    Makoto: So do you, he give you much trouble?
    Hikoro: Yeah…I had to resort to using it.
    Makoto: Don’t feel so bad…I had to take the tape off.
    Hikoro: Damn, must’ve been pretty good to push you that far.
    Hikoro: How’s everyone else doing?
    Makoto: I didn’t check.
    Hikoro: Why not?
    Makoto: I was in a fight.
    Hikoro: So you couldn’t of taken the time to check?
    Makoto: No!
    Hikoro: Well you should of.
    Makoto: Sorry…I was too busy being pelted with sharp objects and bleeding.
    Hikoro: Excuses…excuses.
    Makoto (angry symbol) raises his fist.
    Hikoro and Makoto: !
    Hikoro: You hear that?
    Makoto: Yeah let’s go!
    Hikoro and Makoto run off.

    (End of Chapter)




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