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    dots Submission Name: I NEED HELPdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI NEED HELPdots
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    lying on the bathroom floor
    i ask myself why i do this
    day after day
    how can i live with all this rage
    all of this anger
    and all of this hatred
    towards people
    how can i live with others
    when i can't even live with myself
    why do i scream night after night
    "what is wrong with me"
    where can i go
    what can i do
    i need help
    i can't save me from myself
    i need someone
    anyone just anyone...




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      oppps, clicked it twice. that's the second time I did that today. slow computer

    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      So many times I've went through this. It's hard for me to get things out because I don't like talking to people I believe will judge me because of who I am. I know you have to go through that everyday.

    Every one of your poems have so much truth in it, it's so simple and powerful at the same way. Simple words, with a powerful meaning in it. Ok, I think I'm done.

    Nice Write
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      So many times I've went through this. It's hard for me to get things out because I don't like talking to people I believe will judge me because of who I am. I know you have to go through that everyday.

    Every one of your poems have so much truth in it, it's so simple and powerful at the same way. Simple words, with a powerful meaning in it. Ok, I think I'm done.

    Nice Write
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]


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