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    dots Submission Name: ALL I WANTdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 756
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    Bytes: 554



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    dotsALL I WANTdots
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    all i want is someone to spend time with
    just to be there for me
    when i need a hug
    when i need a shoulder to cry on
    when i need to laugh
    when i need to talk
    when i need to be quiet
    when i am sad
    when i am mad
    when i am happy
    when i am full of rage
    when i am crying
    when i am sleeping
    just someone to spend time with
    to share memories with
    someone i can love
    and who will love me back even more
    all i want is someone to spend time with




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 22:09:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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