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    dots Submission Name: LOST WITHINdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    i'm lost within the darkness
    i'm lost within the coldness
    i'm lost within my rage
    i'm lost within my anger
    i'm lost within my sadness
    i'm lost within my madness
    i'm lost within myself
    which i fear most of all




    Submitted on 2008-04-25 22:14:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      um.. now that I have read it, it does convey the deeper side of your thoughts and rather the darkest corners....

    yes, its an very interesting write up.. sums up the fear of having to look in to oneself for the things endured are so unpleasant thats its a very painful experience to even want to reconsider them.

    | Posted on 2008-04-27 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]


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