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    dots Submission Name: I am Icarus Fallingdots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 75/174/82
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsI am Icarus Fallingdots
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    I am Icarus- falling
    Into oblivion below
    Crashing into certain doom
    And things I do not know

    I flew on wings of wax
    Then I began to melt
    My whole life dripped away
    Along with the love I'd felt

    I am Prometheus- chained
    Forced into suffering
    Made to pay the price
    As if it was all for nothing

    Torn to pieces each day
    But healing just enough
    I am Prometheus chained
    Bound by the ties of love

    I am Echo- silent
    Unable to escape
    Not a word that I can say
    To make this go away

    I repeat what others say
    Unable to speak on my own
    I am Echo- silent
    Made to live alone




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      WOW I can't believe no one has commented... Maybe they don't know Greek mythology but I happen to love it and I thought this was a wonderful spin on that... It flowed very nice which I think complemented the feeling of being restrained without being able to even scream while you're falling from where you really want to be... Just what I got I think you could have made it more complex and using these wonderful stories as a foundation but for what you were expressing I thought it was great... I wouldn't change anything wonderful write in my opinion and I will make sure to read more from you... Hope you get to read some of mine...

    Great Write,
    Anthony
    | Posted on 2008-04-26 00:00:00 | by Kersofmia | [ Reply to This ]



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