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    dots Submission Name: An exaggerationdots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 503/510/143
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAn exaggerationdots
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    Somewhere..
    In twilight and dewdrops,
    in fog and fall;

    In flying and falling,
    in laughter and pain,

    In noise and calm,
    in faraway rainbow and mysterious horizon,

    In secrets and freedom,
    in poetry and music,

    can i say something?

    In endless waiting and praying,
    in promises and broken dreams,

    In trust and doubts,
    in oneness and in space,

    In hugs and coldness,
    in skies and oyster-treasured ocean,

    In tears and questions,
    in softness and quietness,

    In first rain-touched thirst of soil and tired toes
    in moments and memories,

    are you listening?

    In forever and ever..

    In moon-whispered scented hair
    and in lost eyes,
    love and you,
    so fleeble, such a fable,

    an exaggeration?




    Submitted on 2008-04-26 07:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Love exaggerates and expands all of the senses, and makes all the world a wonder!

    Very soulful and ethereal verse, Vedanta!

    Bravo!
    | Posted on 2008-04-26 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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