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    dots Submission Name: The Gift (I'm Gone)dots
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    Author: hybridsongwrite
    ASL Info:    20 / M / MN, USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 162/150/58
    Words: 358
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    dotsThe Gift (I'm Gone)dots
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    This is the gift, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done was wrong
    This is all shit, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done is wrong

    I wrote you a verse, and that’s all that you’re worth
    Just a stick to be pissed on and stuck in the dirt
    And on it, I planted a flag, this statue I made
    A silhouette of the devil, it looks like your face

    I made this as an effigy for you
    I’ll burn it to the ground cause I fucking hate you

    This is the gift, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done was wrong
    This is all shit, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done is wrong
    You’re just a bitch
    You make me sick
    Get the fuck out of my life
    I hope you die

    I wrote you these chords, though it is so much more
    Than you worth, you deserve this cause you are a whore
    It couldn’t be love, cause you have been repeatedly touched
    By a hundred other people, you have been used up

    I made it a point to include this little part
    ‘Cause you know it’s true and it tears you apart

    This is the gift, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done was wrong
    This is all shit, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done is wrong
    You’re just a bitch
    You make me sick
    Get the fuck out of my life
    I hope you die

    This is just step one
    Now, look what you’ve done
    This is just step one
    Look how far I’ve come

    I’ve moved on and I’m as happy as can be
    ‘Cause I found someone I love that makes me happy
    How does it feel to know you’ll never be mine
    I’ve moved on with my life, I hope that you die

    This is the gift, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done was wrong
    This is all shit, I’m gone
    Everything we’ve ever done is wrong
    You’re just a bitch
    You make me sick
    Get the fuck out of my life
    I hope you die

    This is just step one
    Now I’m done




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      If this were made into a song, I'd probably have it on my iPod, to be perfectly honest. It's almsot like a "fight song" as my friends and I call it. There's so much energy and emotion going through this that it's almsot fun to read. Someone must have really pissed you off to inspire you to write this. There are so many lines that you've used in this that, to me, are just genious and reading some of your stuff tonight has really made my day.

    =MHK=
    | Posted on 2008-06-14 00:00:00 | by Ayane | [ Reply to This ]



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