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    dots Submission Name: SPRING TIMEdots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSPRING TIMEdots
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    lighting strikes the sky
    a thousand rainbows
    recover the storm
    the darkness
    soon becomes light
    the last rain drops trickle
    down to the puddles below
    trees growing leaves
    flowers are blooming
    animals are coming out to play
    children are full of laughter
    and happiness
    awaiting lives to come
    new born babies cry
    to the call of their mothers
    horses galloping
    dogs chasing children on bikes
    the smell of fresh cut grass
    lingers in the air
    the winter is finaly over




    Submitted on 2008-04-27 11:34:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      he ythats realy good it realy woke me up it's nice and cheerie keep up the god writing
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by vencix | [ Reply to This ]


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