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    dots Submission Name: TOO LATE I'M DEAD (KORN)dots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1893



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    dotsTOO LATE I'M DEAD (KORN)dots
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    too late I'm dead
    precision planning
    extraction demanding
    the best psychiatrist psychic
    soothsayers (soothsayers)

    analysing my instincts
    you got it all figured out
    too late I'm dead
    too late I'm dead
    you should have said I would have
    hung around a little longer
    too late I'm dead
    you should have said I would have
    hung around a little longer
    too late i'm dead

    fuck everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    done everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    fuck everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    known everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now

    too late I'm dead
    I made my bed
    you should,too belong
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    right beside me
    the beast is mad
    the patient's hanging out
    the trees have all burnt to the ground

    in this vicinity
    it's a strange retribution
    to be lying here so close to what I despise

    fuck everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    done everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    fuck everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now
    known everything everything everything
    how could you love someone with
    what they've done now

    too late I'm dead




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