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    dots Submission Name: THE MANGLED 3dots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 562
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    dotsTHE MANGLED 3dots
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    i turn on my flashlight
    and right in my face is a man
    i scream
    the man covers my mouth
    "shhhh" he says
    "you'll wake him up"
    he lets go of me
    i quietly ask him who he is
    he replies "i'm blaze. and you are"
    i reply "my names vincenzo"
    i here foot steps again
    but this time they shake the ground
    "oh no!" blaze says
    "you have awoken him!"
    a giant roar comes out of no where
    and there it is 3 times the size of myself
    a creature so hideous
    and it begins to attack us both!

    to be continued




    Submitted on 2008-04-27 12:18:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You should add more context and make this a story
    (I've read all three so far by the way)
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]


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