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    dots Submission Name: A sold out soul, a youth fucked updots
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    Author: Piper
    ASL Info:    23/ Female/ The System
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 52/54/37
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 1492
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 938



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    dotsA sold out soul, a youth fucked updots
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    Is life supposed to be like this
    Whoring and selling out to be someone
    Heroin, cocaine, LSD and speed
    Mental illnesses and bisexual love

    I'm so glam in my faux-fur coat
    Kissing girls and drinking champagne
    I let them tape while I fuck a stranger
    I'll do anything to draw attention

    As a child I've been molested
    I've been mocked, and I've been beaten
    Scars on my arms faded away
    But now I'm a whore, a culture slut

    I am everything, still I have nothing
    I love you, I hate you
    Manic depressive
    Call me your lover, I don't give a fuck

    Everybody loves me,
    No one respects me
    Take my body,
    Throw my mind away

    I cannot make a living
    With just my intelligence
    Too shallow, to greedy
    Just a faceless nihilism.




    Submitted on 2008-04-27 15:41:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it except that I think it would give so much more to the topic if it flowed more like a rant. I'm not sure how to explain what I mean but when I read it, I head a person saying it very sharply and I think if the sentences were a bit choppier, the point would come across a lot harder.

    I really like the 2nd stanza.
    | Posted on 2008-06-26 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      damn... is that all true... cuz that totally sucks.
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]


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