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    dots Submission Name: Writers Block [a poem]dots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    19/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.97 - 33/216/157
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 222
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 553



    Description:
       writer's block sucks x_x


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    dotsWriters Block [a poem]dots
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    Oh when the juices of my brain
    Flow to the left, not right
    I think I might just go insane
    And stew in my plight

    For when the words cease to flow
    Yet images inspire
    What demon could have caused this row
    Tween mind and soul-wire

    Meter, rhyme, and images
    Refuse to play a part
    In this game of poetry
    The inky form of art

    Oh when the fluids of my soul
    Flow to the right, not left
    There is no way to go
    So I sit and dwell, bereft




    Submitted on 2008-04-27 20:04:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey, now THIS is a poem i can relate to. why does it seem that all of us brilliant peots must have writers block at one time or another and have our most profounds thoughts locked away!
    :smileygrin:

    No but seriously i can really see the images your trying to make visual here. the demons that steal our ideas just wen were about to make our masterpiece. the game the art the rhyme of the poem .ALL essential parts no doubt

    the rythm: practical
    the visual: better than most
    vocabulary: great

    all in all id give you a B+ and because i can relate A- keep up the good work ill comment soon

    - Torcher out
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]



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