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Submission Name: You dots

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Author:	dismentled
ASL Info:	24/M/"South of Heaven"
Elite Ratio:	4.13 - 617/549/200
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Poetry/Them
Total Views:	62
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	403

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You

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I wanna kill you
I wanna kill you
I wanna kill you
And your dreams!

You're nothing
you're nothing
you will always
be nothing to me!

I hate you
I hate you
A bleeding hear
worn on my sleeve!

I hate you!
I'll kill you!!
cause you will ALWAYS
be nothing to me!!!

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