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    dots Submission Name: "Felt Like Writing"dots
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    Author: Twin_Snakes
    ASL Info:    19/M/ O.O
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 14/10/7
    Words: 177
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 59
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Alright, it could have gone either way, but i choose the darker side. I love writing about dark and light, and how it pertains to life and stuff. I just want your opinion.


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    I'm in this darkness. It surrounds me. It just won't leave. I want it to go but the more I try the darker it gets. There are people here. I recognize their voices but I cannot see them. I can only feel there hands pushing me over and over in this circular motion. My head is spinning and I can't seem to focus. I want to get out and I start running but all there is, is even more darkness. Where is the light? Do I wait for the darkness to swallow me whole? I need some one to come and tell me that everything is going to be okay. I just want to feel that warm embrace, that love that used to be there. I want that person to lift me from the ground and let me out of this prison. Let me FREE! Where are you? It feels like the darkness is going to win and I can't ever get out. Darkness will consume me.

    -By: Kayla Valentiny

    -Posted By: TwinSnakes by request




    Submitted on 2008-04-28 08:34:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      LMAO, this isn't about light and darkness, in fact, there is only a brief reference to either in this... I would say it is more about being desperate to get laid while being a monogamous personality type at best. But hey, to each his (or her) own right?
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      If you peer to long into the darkness, it will consume you.
    The only way to escape it is find your way to the light. I also love to write about light and darkness. I've lived in the gray area for so long, I can see both sides.
    Love and Peace,
    Christie
    | Posted on 2008-04-28 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]



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