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    dots Submission Name: TO LOVE SOMEBODY (BLUE RODEO)dots
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    Author: Kornfreakinabox
    ASL Info:    16/f/massachusetts
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 44/61/74
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsTO LOVE SOMEBODY (BLUE RODEO)dots
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    on me
    I want my life to be
    Here with you
    I wanna be with you

    There's a way
    I hear everybody say
    Just to do everything that I can
    But what good will it do
    If I can't have you
    If I can't have you

    Baby, you don't know what it's like
    No you don't know what it's like
    You don't know what it's like
    No you don't know what it's like

    To love somebody
    To love somebody
    The way I love you




    Submitted on 2008-04-28 17:45:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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