let the rain out -------------------------------------------
When you first come into this world
Don’t let them fool you /
don’t let them need you
When the open of the eyes of a little kitten
Try not to stand to close /
try not to kiss the skin
When the open of the sky brings the sun
Let your friends in /
try not to cry the face of fear
As the mother ship comes with bombs
I’ll seek for the sword that brings light to the force of rape
Don’t be fooled by the other men
Lay your body down for the lord
Ask for forgiveness /
and I’ll be by your side of truth
But I’ll never let you scalp with out the key
How can you bring the light to day?
As my fish seek to destroy the other lover /
A wish bone never gave up
but what can I say
Sure this is the end for you
I will not cry by your bedside.
wow, this is fantastic!!!! you arrange phrases so that the reader is swept in, carried along by the structure, and the message is tight and pure, just beneath that groovy phrase structure. this one is a definite for the book! write ten more like this one!
Submission Name: let the rain out 
