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Submission Name: Sugar Water dots

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Author:	Epiphany
ASL Info:	38/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:	4.39 - 3174/2057/361
Words:	42

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	100
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	317

Description:
Hummingbrd feeders out on the patio - I've taken several nice shots - <@> love Spring!
Happy NOW ES Creators!

love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share

Sugar Water dots

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Crystal clear green watering hole
Red bud flowers
Inner yellow showers
Nature's call ~ Sugar Water is their goal

Wings A Flutter
Faces A Color

Hummingbirds sipping siren song
Singing excitedly ~ Come along
Zip! Zoom!!
What a ride!!!

Submitted on 2008-04-28 20:40:20 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  As others have said before, very jazzy beat. Upbeat and amusing-read this on a rather depressing day... picked up my spirits a little.
| Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ha! This is delightful! I keep bird feeders in the front and back yards, and have lots of shrubbery, so have a big variety of birds that we enjoy feeding and watching. The hummingbirds migrate through, and they are delightful to see when they are here!

Thanks for sharing this Tif!
| Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  I was once attacked by a humming bird. Which completly changed my view on them. They are beautiful--and apparently evil. I completly agree with AsiaticFox, it does seem like a coffee house poem. Good Write.

Anna
| Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ]
  Hummingbirds are amazing. Its a wonder how their wings move so fast...up to 80 beats a second!

This makes my mouth water, thinking of sugar water. Holy crap, I must be turning into a hummingbird.

This had a fun beat to it. It seemed like something that should be read in a coffee house in a jazzy voice.

*snaps fingers* cool, woman.
| Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
  Those hummingbirds are such a delight to watch. I always keep fuchsias hanging on my back porch for them. Amazing creatures and beauty on wings! Enjoyed your poem, Sharon :-)
| Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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