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    dots Submission Name: Sugar Waterdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       Hummingbrd feeders out on the patio - I've taken several nice shots - <@> love Spring!
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    dotsSugar Waterdots

    Crystal clear green watering hole
    Red bud flowers
    Inner yellow showers
    Nature's call ~ Sugar Water is their goal

    Wings A Flutter
    Faces A Color

    Hummingbirds sipping siren song
    Singing excitedly ~ Come along
    Zip! Zoom!!
    What a ride!!!

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      As others have said before, very jazzy beat. Upbeat and amusing-read this on a rather depressing day... picked up my spirits a little.
    | Posted on 2008-11-19 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is delightful! I keep bird feeders in the front and back yards, and have lots of shrubbery, so have a big variety of birds that we enjoy feeding and watching. The hummingbirds migrate through, and they are delightful to see when they are here!

    Thanks for sharing this Tif!
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I was once attacked by a humming bird. Which completly changed my view on them. They are beautiful--and apparently evil. I completly agree with AsiaticFox, it does seem like a coffee house poem. Good Write.

    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ]
      Hummingbirds are amazing. Its a wonder how their wings move so fast...up to 80 beats a second!

    This makes my mouth water, thinking of sugar water. Holy crap, I must be turning into a hummingbird.

    This had a fun beat to it. It seemed like something that should be read in a coffee house in a jazzy voice.

    *snaps fingers* cool, woman.
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      Those hummingbirds are such a delight to watch. I always keep fuchsias hanging on my back porch for them. Amazing creatures and beauty on wings! Enjoyed your poem, Sharon :-)
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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