wow wowowowowowowowow AMAZING BRAVO! i wish i could come up with something like that. the ending its so perfect it ties everything together that was really amazing.... it was such a delicate subject to admit that you hurt someone and yet you still care very much about that person it was so pure and loving.... nice writing
wow. this is sweet and gentle, a lovers lament. I like how you kept it fairly simple, with a touch of longing. I think that you did this quite well, however it might help if you tried something a tiny bit more complex next time?
I really liked this poem and I can totally relate. Granted I am a girl but it's almost the same thing but in my case I had a prince instead of a princess. I'm gunna add this poem to my favorites because I could really relate in all honesty. It made me realize that I didn't listen to him as well and I now know that it was a bad thing to force him to do things. Which is wrong and I feel awful about it now. The whole thing was so clear and precise I could follow it fully. Don't change it. I really did like in all honesty. I wouldn't lie if I didn't like a poem. I haven't read a well-written one since my friend Hariet wrote a poem. *claps* I applaud your poetism!