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    dots Submission Name: Blanket of Lovedots
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    Author: shadowmere88
    ASL Info:    19/M/Somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    2.05 - 5/16/3
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 71
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsBlanket of Lovedots
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    People find many ways to feel that sense of comfort
    They want to feel warm and secure.
    Whether it’s when they wake up or lie down
    They want nothing more than to feel pure.

    I feel comfort when I climb into bed and fall asleep
    My dreams and imagination seem to carry me away.
    It’s everything from the pillows and even the sheets
    But most of all it’s the blanket I need to end my day.

    When I think about us
    I think about the covering you have over me.
    The blanket of love
    That covers all my worries and makes me feel at peace.

    You’re that perfect comforter
    Whose beauty and soft spirit draw me.
    It’s like every stitch of your being is flawless
    It’s the warmth of your love that consumes my everything.

    At times blankets loose there comfort
    And people always tell you that it’s time to put up the old,
    But this blanket you have given me I will never throw away.
    Cause you have completely turned my life around so I’ll never be cold.








    Submitted on 2008-04-29 08:50:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow that was honestly really good... whomever this may be to is a very lucky person. this was really deep and made me question life, i loved how you compared it to a bed and everything that was really interesting. a persons comfort as something that carresses you and holds you all i have to is WOW. - Anne
    | Posted on 2008-05-30 00:00:00 | by annezah | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice!... a good write, I like it. You sound like someone in love.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]



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