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    dots Submission Name: Don't Feed The Baboonsdots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    18/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 97/161/101
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 80
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 638



    Description:
       Watch outfor those back stabbers people, whether in love or just friends


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    dotsDon't Feed The Baboonsdots
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    (If) Love is war---
    Friendship is politics:
    State your claim,
    then Aim to do the opposite,
    opt to get flamed,
    under lock and key,
    consider the game, possibly,
    Nothing's stopping,
    call it cockilly,
    no holds barred,
    it's a cold day,
    and we all get scarred,
    So check your back,
    it's bleeding from the stab wounds,
    clots start to form,
    infact, there'll be a scab soon,
    Read the sign, dummy,
    "Don't feed the baboons"
    And don't turn your back
    Or else they will attack you




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      Oh my wow. You really should put a new name on this (I thought it was going to be some nonsence but then decided I might as well look)
    I really love this. Great veiw on it!
    -Safire
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]


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