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    dots Submission Name: Don't Feed The Baboonsdots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 562
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 819



    Description:
       Watch outfor those back stabbers people, whether in love or just friends


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    dotsDon't Feed The Baboonsdots
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    (If) Love is war---
    Friendship is politics:
    State your claim,
    then Aim to do the opposite,
    opt to get flamed,
    under lock and key,
    consider the game, possibly,
    Nothing's stopping me,
    the all call it cockilly,
    no holds barred,
    it's a cold day,
    and we all get scarred,
    So check your back,
    it's bleeding from the stab wounds,
    clots start to form,
    infact, there'll be a scab soon,
    Read the sign, dummy,
    "Don't feed the baboons"
    And don't turn your back
    Or else they will attack you


    Read the sign, dummy,
    "Don't feed the baboons"
    And don't turn your back
    Or else they will attack you.....




    Submitted on 2008-04-29 12:23:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my wow. You really should put a new name on this (I thought it was going to be some nonsence but then decided I might as well look)
    I really love this. Great veiw on it!
    -Safire
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]


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