love notes no one got by Madelaine

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Submission Name: love notes no one got dots

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Author:	Madelaine
ASL Info:	18/F/USA
Elite Ratio:	4.58 - 52/16/7
Words:	27

Class/Type:	Poetry/Romance
Total Views:	101
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	190

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love notes no one got dots

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love notes no one got
lay forlornly on the desk
sprinkled with her perfume
sweet and arabesque
and all the tears
leaving silver marks
upon the paper

Submitted on 2008-04-29 12:59:30 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Longing for love. A Love letter, written to no one in particular. I really liked the way you said that the letter lays sad on your desk; it's almost like the letter is sad as well, almost like the love letter can feel your pain

Well done, i loved it , so to speak :)
| Posted on 2008-05-14 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]
Love notes that no-one got is so romantic! Those unspoken words, that will last for an eternity, but will never be heard or read!

I wrote once in one of my poems that

"the saddest words are the ones unspoken,
and the saddest rhythm is the throb of a broken heart"!

Well done, lovely lady!

| Posted on 2008-05-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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