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    dots Submission Name: love notes no one gotdots
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    Author: Madelaine
    ASL Info:    18/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.58 - 52/16/7
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotslove notes no one gotdots
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    love notes no one got
    lay forlornly on the desk
    sprinkled with her perfume
    sweet and arabesque
    and all the tears
    leaving silver marks
    upon the paper




    Submitted on 2008-04-29 12:59:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Longing for love. A Love letter, written to no one in particular. I really liked the way you said that the letter lays sad on your desk; it's almost like the letter is sad as well, almost like the love letter can feel your pain

    Well done, i loved it , so to speak :)
    | Posted on 2008-05-14 00:00:00 | by Polydectes | [ Reply to This ]
      Love notes that no-one got is so romantic! Those unspoken words, that will last for an eternity, but will never be heard or read!

    I wrote once in one of my poems that

    "the saddest words are the ones unspoken,
    and the saddest rhythm is the throb of a broken heart"!

    Well done, lovely lady!

    | Posted on 2008-05-07 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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