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    Author: BeautifulSoul
    ASL Info:    17/F/In
    Elite Ratio:    7.71 - 52/22/16
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    dotsSeepdots
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    I feel like screaming,
    when of your deeds I am dreaming.
    Depression is no word to describe,
    this feeling I have deep inside.
    For what you did cut deep,
    and on the ground my blood will seep.




    Submitted on 2008-04-29 13:22:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. This was a refreshingly short poem. And, it wasn't short in a way thats like, where's the rest of it? But more in a way, like, that makes me think.

    Good job. I can't really think of anything to suggest. Its amazing. Really. You are beyond major.

    | Posted on 2008-05-01 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]


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