I liked it. It was very different and thats what makes it so cool. It was cool how you talked about you relationship, (or lack there of) with your mom and the ending was cool too. I liked how you put that as your title. Very original, and it's going as a favorite. Jan,
I thought this was very original... I thought this was good and full of lots of thoughts... though most were a bit pessimistic and sad like "half empty not half full" which is always the way I look at a glass. It also seemed like it contained some innocence... very child like. I thought it was a good poem though. I liked it. Brooke
Self contemplative to boot. One more time round the navel. However, maybe it needs to be said sometimes. In which case you said it well. Just not my favourite topic.
i thought that this piece was amazing on more than one level, in its irony, originality, and many other things and it all just came together perfectly in my mind thank you for your comment on ''why man''
Submission Name: Mother May I
