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    dots Submission Name: City of Werewolvesdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 1039/1115/533
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsCity of Werewolvesdots
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    The sand reclaimed its streets to then entomb
    Its fanes and monuments of time worn black.
    These dark basaltic stones would bake and crack
    While in the cooling night the frigid gloom
    Would call them forth to watch the hunt resume
    As through the black savannah that dread pack,
    Would seek the hapless people to attack
    While moonlit orchids spread their strange perfume.

    There in those fallen domes and spires call
    Each werewolf to his mate when dusk comes on
    As overhead the stars, a dismal pall,
    Wait for the day, the life-renewing dawn.
    It thrives until the final entropy
    Will then expel this dark lycanthropy.




    Submitted on 2008-04-29 13:55:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very cool. Last line of the second stanza should be their and not "there".

    It's nice to see you venturing out. What on earth has brought about this turnaround in style?

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    Maddie
    | Posted on 2008-05-13 00:00:00 | by Madelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      You can go outside at the Ranch on virtually any evening after sundown and hear the howls of Prairie Wolves and Coyotes! And, even in the howling of the Coyote Packs, their kinship to wolves comes across readily, and it's not unusual to feel one's hair beginning to stand on end and the hair on the back of the neck rising! That eerie howl seems to descend from the back of Graveyards and the depths of hell, and telegraphs stories that has made mankind hover closer to their fires for eons!

    Excellent lycanthropic write, my friend!
    | Posted on 2008-04-29 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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