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    dots Submission Name: 7SEVENdots
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    Author: Rex Gold
    ASL Info:    18/m/U.S.A
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 60/46/67
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 95
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    7 daggers
    into my heart
    7 warm tears
    7 days to contemplate.
    The depression
    during 7 in the evening
    7 misconceptions
    about me
    7 ways I eat pain
    which is several
    7 reasons
    I'm not good enough for much
    4+3 is honesty,heart and humilty
    equals 7 seasons
    7 steps i take every 15secs
    while walking alone
    7 letters written to the world
    7 needles
    to somehow numb this pain
    7 belongs to God.
    then why do i have this number
    on me,in me,within me?
    7 unanswered questions
    7 prayers that 7 does'nt kill me.




    Submitted on 2008-04-29 22:10:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm not sure I really understand this. Why 7? It seems that 7 is such a popular number at the moment. I can feel the pain, but I don't understand.......why, I guess. This is beautiful, but I think it could use some minor tweaking, and playing around with the words.

    Anna
    | Posted on 2008-05-02 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ]
      *thoughtful look* I can feel this Grace. I'm not sure I understand the deeper meaning behind it though. And that line 'I'm not good enough for much', made me a little teary eyed. And I've cried like 4 times in the past hour, so just the line. Anyway, I really do not believe that line, and it saddens me that you think that. I would like to know the deeper meaning Grace, and I really liked this poem (I know that sounds lame, but it's true...) Thanks for sharing hon! Peash and inspiration!

    Duv
    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]



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