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Hand in Hand

Author: Peggy Paris
ASL Info:    61/F/USA
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Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Romance
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Hand in Hand

Touch speaks in silence once set free
When longing's quenched in ecstasy.
Your fingertips pressed close to mine
Send shivers running down my spine.

As years together slip on by,
A happy tear still fills my eye
In precious moments quite divine
Whenever your hand touches mine.

Together, we walk hand in hand
Until the hourglass losses sand;
And, when the final grain drops through,
I'll still be holding hands with you.

Submitted on 2008-04-29 22:41:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a delightful and most elegant and sensitive poem! There is something that is so innocent and romantic about Lovers holding hands!

Your lovely poem has a sensitivity about it that is simply wonderful!

Way to go, lovely lady!!
| Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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