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    dots Submission Name: Hand in Handdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
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    dotsHand in Handdots
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    Touch speaks in silence once set free
    When longing's quenched in ecstasy.
    Your fingertips pressed close to mine
    Send shivers running down my spine.

    As years together slip on by,
    A happy tear still fills my eye
    In precious moments quite divine
    Whenever your hand touches mine.

    Together, we walk hand in hand
    Until the hourglass losses sand;
    And, when the final grain drops through,
    I'll still be holding hands with you.





    Submitted on 2008-04-29 22:41:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a delightful and most elegant and sensitive poem! There is something that is so innocent and romantic about Lovers holding hands!

    Your lovely poem has a sensitivity about it that is simply wonderful!

    Way to go, lovely lady!!
    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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