Description: QWrote this from my sister's point of view..i was trying to understand why she does one night stands...i came to the c9onclusion..theres no other reason...she just wants to be loved. *shrugs* tell me what u guys think..mind u we are triplets so we can know what each other thinks anyway. :)
what category should this go under??
Love me for the night -------------------------------------------
Take a dip in my caramel selection
Sing the songs of innocent denial
Sleep and dream of tasteful intuition
Love me for the night
Touch my soul as my emotions cry for freedom
Whisper slowly that you will only disappear
Reassure me when morning comes I'll be alright
Just love me for the night
WOW! It is such a romantic vision of one night stands. In my mind there will be a taste of bitterness right after. But what i can sense underlying in the poem is a deep sentiment of melancholy, especially in teh 2nd stanza maybe we also sense a fear of commitment. Unlike the 1st stanza, where we only feel the sensuality and passion. I read over and over, good work...
Hmm.. I think it would be good under "love" or "passion" perhaps... Anyways I thought this was a good piece.. short but to the point. I liked how you used the "Just love me for the night" at the end of both stanzas. It made that line stand out more powerfully then the rest. Nice piece. Very emotional.