The message is fairly interesting but I would suggest a complete re-write of the piece. I figure that with your rhyme pattern you wanted to convey irony but you failed at that because the rhyme scheme seems utterly forced and unnatural. You might want to consider writing without having to unnecessarily make the words rhyme. Sometimes the rhymes comes up naturally, sometimes they just don't. You could also use some other alternative stylistic devices such as alliteration or any that suits you.
You could also avoid using the word "curriculum", to shorten that line and overhauling that stanza particularly. I don't feel the aforementioned word sounds poetically aesthetic, to put it that way.
I hope you don't think I'm being condescending or anything remotely related to that. I'm merely trying to help.
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