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    dots Submission Name: I feel nothingdots
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    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsI feel nothingdots
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    To castaway these demons I must castaway eveything in my life.
    M y body is numb and my hands are as cold as death it's self.
    I feel no emotion at all, no how much pain and sorrow I go though.
    I feel no happyness, no sadness, no anger, no fear. no greed , no envy, no love I feel nothing.
    To cast away my shadows and releash myself I must let go.
    I have nothing left and nowhere to go..
    The worse thig is that I can not cry cause my tear s dried up a longtime ago.
    No words can express what I am feeling and that's because I feel nothing,
    I wish there was someone that could understand but for them to understand they must lose everything like I did, but mybe one day I can feel again and live a normal life.........
    Oh who am I kidding my life will never be normal because there is no such thing as normal.
    I've come this far and yet I'm nowhere.




    Submitted on 2008-04-30 10:18:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i sincerely feel this poem. i mean its sad that the feelings are numb and immune to any form emotions.

    "To cast away my shadows and releash myself I must let go." - in my opinion, i kinda like the way that the casting away of shadows relates to the lost of emotions. Kinda wish it was more to that honestly ^_^ haha BUT its a good piece overall ( :

    | Posted on 2008-09-17 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      g89

    see, look what you made me do.

    STOP THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M TRYING TO COMMENT ON UR POEM.

    Now, i told you about your spelling mistakes, so, i'm done.

    bye
    ~*~katara~*~
    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      you're right, there is no such thing as normal, but no matter the situation, you will always have someone. Just be happy your life isn't as bad as some other people's. Understand that someday it will all be done, so until then make your life as good as possible. use the people around you to make your life better.

    There is always a brighter side.
    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]


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