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    dots Submission Name: money does not make the world go rounddots

    Author: shadow of death
    ASL Info:    17/M/baltimore
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 38/53/34
    Words: 220
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    dotsmoney does not make the world go rounddots

    In this world we are born as nothing and though out our lives we make itwhat chose.
    Some live the so call perfect life having everthing they ever wanted and clame to be happy but the true is some aren't.
    some see the treu horrors of life, all the mney in the world can not make some one happy and for some it only causes sorrow. to have everything and yet you have nothing.
    There are some that have fallen so far they can't get up.
    To live in lonelyness and have nothing and are lucky to have the shrt on there on there back and yet some can still be happy with nothing, and that because some only need the friends, family, and other loved ones by there side.
    I write this message to all those that my have come on o so money and feel that tey have everthing they ever needed I will tell you this money is nice but you are still poor in ways unseen. I hate you kind that think that all they need is money in thre packets to been happy, because happyness is only a state of mind and soon you will spend all you happyness and be lef with nothing but sorrow.
    so good luck and have a [censored[ life

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      That is true. However, I must say--even though this is your rant and it is every bit your right to rant in whatever way you please--the manner in which you hate emenates arrogance.

    (Please pardon spelling)

    The thought is strong though, and I know what you mean. Remember, hating gets you no where.
    | Posted on 2008-05-15 00:00:00 | by SweetAndOhSoME | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah, i'll wait until you leave to comment. i won't comment with you looking at me.

    and i'll wait until you fix all the mistakes.

    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by daughterofdeath | [ Reply to This ]
      Again your right, because when your lying on your deathbed or fighting on the battle field money won't stop death from coming for you and it will never make you truly happy like friends and family do. They are the only people besides yourself that can give you happiness.

    Money burns, love doesn't.
    | Posted on 2008-04-30 00:00:00 | by cor | [ Reply to This ]

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