Ok, not what I would call the best poem necessarily. It was ok, but there wasn't much depth to it. I liked the lines...
Then the cool blade setting fire to my skin
It was a good description. It had more depth than any other line in your poem. All I can say is perhaps you could add some more in it. Don't just let it be lines hanging there.
It was pretty common. It didn't rhyme, which isn't saying it has to because a lot of poetry sounds great without it, but it didn't have anything else in there to add a little originality.
The use of {} to emphasize certain words or even bolding words always adds a nice touch to the poem, if it's a poem that flows well with it.
I understood what you were trying to say in the poem with your feelings, but you need to try to convey them in a more fit way. You used great words such as ample, contemplate, and resurfacing which shows you know words well. But you need words with more decription. It shouldn't be so cut off and sharp.
Overall, it was a nice poem. But, I felt it was somewhat bland. I hope any of my advice helps. Keep up the good work. You have great potential.
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