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    dots Submission Name: a blazing skydots
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    Author: iaida
    ASL Info:    20/m/chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 82/85/201
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 337



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    dotsa blazing skydots
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    against the tide of the norm
    taking starnds of random form


    sailing through a vacant sky
    of dust red and water up high
    clouds so blue with stars bright
    eyes become glued on this wondrous sight

    beauty bestowed upon this vagrant sight
    a luminous sky soaring so bright




    Submitted on 2008-04-30 22:29:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You are quite well versed in making something so simple seem wonderous, it seems.

    "taking starnds of random form"
    should that be strands, perhaps?

    peace
    | Posted on 2008-05-14 00:00:00 | by Madelaine | [ Reply to This ]



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