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    dots Submission Name: i will save youdots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    20/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 60/204/178
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 76
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 610



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    dotsi will save youdots
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    you are a broken person
    you have been hurt so many times
    i know you are dying inside
    ready to give up and let go
    i wont let you go
    whatever it takes im going to save you
    whatever it takes im going to make you whole again
    i'll teach you to fly and feel free
    feel the afternoon breeze
    your safe with me, i promise you
    that while i am near i'll wipe away all your tears
    i will destroy all your fears
    wrap you im my arms and never let go
    give you a reason to live
    a reason to love
    i will save you...




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      naw thats cute i like it
    | Posted on 2008-05-03 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]


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