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    dots Submission Name: Chapter 4: The Surprisedots
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    Author: Fallyn Angel
    ASL Info:    19/F/CT
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 44/54/47
    Words: 1221
    Class/Type: Fanfic/Love
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       chapter 4 of my fanfic.. read it and you MUST comment it


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    dotsChapter 4: The Surprisedots
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    The next day Jillian woke up with a massive headache. She looked at her clock and then jumped out of bed. It was already 2 in the afternoon. She looked around her room in a panic manner. She tried to find some clothes to wear when in walked Brendon smiling.

    Jillian looked at him and stopped moving. “What happened last night? How did I get here and why are you here?” She wanted to know the answers to her questions.

    Brendon smiled at her and walked towards her. “Well last night you came to my concert and we kissed for a bit. Then I had the limo driver take us all out for some drinks and then after a few hours I had the limo driver take you home. I’ve been here the whole night. You told me not to leave you so I stayed. I was waiting for you to wake up.” He got to her and rubbed her shoulders smiling at her.

    Jillian breathed in and smiled. “Oh good. Nothing bad happened last night. I have to go to work though. I’m really late.” She looked up at him.

    Brendon shook his head smiling. “No you don’t have work today. I called in for you and everything is okay. You’re fine. Everything is all good. I just wanted us to spend sometime together and be an actual couple. I have a few days off before I have to go and I wanted to spend them with you.” He smiled and kissed her forehead.

    Jillian smiled up at him. “You are so sweet to me. I love you so much Brendon, you have no idea. I would love to spend a few days with you. I’m gunna miss you when you do leave though.”

    Brendon nodded and let go of her. “I know and I’m gunna miss you as well. I don’t know how I’ll be able to handle being away from you. I promise to God I won’t ever cheat on you though. I love you too much to do that to you. I promise you that.” He hugged her tightly and kissed the top of her head.

    Jillian nodded and smiled more holding onto him. “I know and I won’t ever cheat on you. I could never do that to you. We’ll see each other soon. Nothing will keep us apart.” She nodded and closed her eyes.

    Brendon smiled more and held onto her. “Alright. Let’s go have some fun today, tomorrow and the day after. Then I have to leave so don’t get all sad on me yet. I have already planned out my last few days with you. They will be awesome.”

    Jillian smiled more and kissed his lips. “I know they will be amazing because I’ll be with you and everything with you is amazing.” She smiled more and grabbed his hands holding them.

    Brandon held her hands and smiled down at her. He nodded smiling. “Yeah, come on let’s go. I have a fun idea.” He held her hand and walked with her out the door.
    Jill shook her head. “I can’t I’m not dressed yet. Let me get dress and then we can go.”

    He nodded smiling. “Alright I’ll wait downstairs for you. Just hurry up.” He smiled and kissed her lips as he let go of her hand. He walked out of the room closing the door behind him.

    She sat on the bed and breathed in. “What a night I guess. Everything seems so perfect right now. It’s unbelievable.” She smiled and looked around the room. She thought for a moment and then stood up.

    She looked around the room for something to wear and couldn’t find anything good. She went to her drawers and found a pair of jeans. She slipped them on and kept looking for more clothes. She found a band t-shirt in one drawer and a pair of flip-flops in her closet. She put the shirt on and slipped into the flip-flops. She brushed her hair quickly and then opened her door breathing in.

    She breathed in as she walked down the stairs. “Just breathe Jillian. He’s a normal guy. Everything is going fine.” She told herself over and over again as she walked down the stairs.

    He heard her walk down the stairs and turned around smiling. He stood up and walked over to her. “You look great.” He smiled and kissed her forehead. “Let’s go.” He grabbed her hand and ran out the front door with her smiling more.

    Outside, there was a car in the driveway. She looked at it and didn’t know what to say. “Whose is this?” She asked looking at him.

    He smiled and held her hand more. “Well, right now it’s for us but when I leave it’s totally yours.” He smiled and kissed her cheek going over to the passenger’s side opening the door for her. “Come on or we’ll be late.”

    She smiled and looked at him quizzically. “Late for what? Tell me.” She said as she got into the car looking up at him. She buckled up even though she was slightly scared.

    He smiled more and laughed some. “It’s a surprise. But you’ll like it.” He smiled more closing the door. He ran to the other side of the car and got in. He started the car up and grabbed her hand holding it. He drove out of the driveway and down the road. “Close your eyes. You’re gunna love it.” He smiled more.

    She closed her eyes and waited. “I’m scared now. Don’t leave me.” She felt the car come to a stop after about a few minutes in the car. “Are we there? Don’t leave me.” She was even more scared now.

    He got out of the car and went over to her side. He smiled and opened her door. “Keep them closed.” He unbuckled her seatbelt and helped her out of the car. He held her hand as he walked inside of a building.
    She held his hand smiling a little. “Don’t leave my side or I’ll kill you.” She held his hand tighter as they stopped walking.

    He let go of her hand and ran to the side. “Open your eyes now!” He shouted as he turned on a bright light.

    She opened her eyes and looked around. She was center stage in front of an empty room. She smiled more and held her hands over her mouth. She was so happy right now. “How? What? When? Why?” She looked at him as he was walking over to her.

    He walked over to her smiling and took her hands in his. “Because you like to sing. I asked your sister what would be the best gift and she said you love to sing. So I did this for you. You can sing for me. I’ll play the instruments. Please, for me.” He smiled and kissed her lips.

    She nodded kissing him back. “This is the best surprise I’ve ever gotten before. I love it so much. I will sing for you Brendon but only because I love you.” She smiled and kissed him again.




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