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    dots Submission Name: they and themdots
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    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 516
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Dark
    Total Views: 178
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    Bytes: 1107



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       I just put this together, so, if anyone can decipher it It would be a big help.


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    THEY
    They are the ones who did it
    They are the root of all evil
    They commit all of the worlds crimes
    They opened Pandora's box

    THEM
    It is them that saved us
    It is them that saved the world
    It is them that make miracles
    It is them that you all have hope in

    THEY and THEM
    When they and them clash
    Worlds will collide
    People will live and die
    Evil and good, which one will win
    When everything is done
    Only one will prevail
    Will the universe be plunged into darkness
    Or saved by the light

    Maybe perhaps, everything will be in balance.




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      u r the poet i want to become.ur work inspires me.be proud of it.be the poet i see u as.:)
    -rachel-
    | Posted on 2009-05-31 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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