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    dots Submission Name: Shun of a Wiccandots
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    Author: girly101
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    dotsShun of a Wiccandots
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    Shun of Wiccan

    The people may laugh and point,
    Mock and torment,
    or even tell me that im on the highway to hell.

    And so I look at them,
    Pity in my eyes,
    and sadness that their minds are so closed.

    I walk away from the laughing crowd,
    The ones who call me evil, a sinner,
    I walk away after trying to get them to understand.

    I trace my fingers over the pentagram,
    That dangles from a chain around my neck,
    and I tilt my head upwards, gazing towards the skies.

    Oh goddess,
    I ask that you help them to open their minds,
    To see all theyve missed and to see the power they all have within.

    I can still hear their snickers,
    Their hateful, hurtful words,
    They really dont know, they dont understand.

    But when they fall,
    Ill reach out my hand,
    Because thats what a good person does, a Wiccan, a pagan.

    I sit down in my class and smile at my teacher,
    She smiles and nods in acknowledgement,
    She doesnt know Im Wiccan.

    And she sees the great, honor role student,
    The girl who tries hard,
    Regardless of her beliefs.

    The girl who is open to all,
    The black the white and native,
    The Christian the Buddhist and Pagan.

    And she respects me,
    As I hope those students will come to do,
    One day when they are ready.

    The gods will smile upon them then,
    And they will spread their wings,
    And soar.




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      This poem is so true. I too, feel that pain when I'm mocked for my beliefs. And I too try to treat them as I wish they would treat me.

    My favorite part is "I can still hear their snickers,
    Their hateful, hurtful words,
    They really don’t know, they don’t understand.

    But when they fall,
    I’ll reach out my hand,
    Because that’s what a good person does, a Wiccan, a pagan."

    That's all I try to get them to understand. But it's rough living in a close-minded society. Hang in there!
    | Posted on 2008-06-03 00:00:00 | by DemonicInk | [ Reply to This ]
      Ah Merry Meet my friend. I understand this so poem so very much. I too am Pagan though I do not let harsh words hurt me I understand the ridicule you hae suffered and I understand the emotion behind this particular post. All will be well my friend for one day the Mother will take us in her arms. Until next time Merry Part and remember the Rede. An' ye harm none, do what ye will.


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    | Posted on 2008-05-30 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this! Def had a good message; I think we all need to start being more open minded and accepting, not just in religion, but in all social/economic and political matters.

    This world would be a better place.

    First thing I thought of when I read the title were these books I used to read (Circle of Three series); they were good. I think they opened up or made me more informed on Wicca.

    Good job on the piece!
    | Posted on 2008-05-01 00:00:00 | by TheStillSilence | [ Reply to This ]


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