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    dots Submission Name: Supermomdots
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    Author: FallenGrace
    ASL Info:    29 already?/m/ga
    Elite Ratio:    5.67 - 360/375/90
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 71
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    dotsSupermomdots
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    Supermom lost her cape today
    she lost lots more too
    and flew straight to the clinic
    in an old Nissan

    It’s no vacation
    her spandex outfit placed in a white paper envelope
    with her knitting utensils
    and jewelry

    She isn’t flying anymore
    She’s below ground
    2 feet under
    but still breathing through dust covered lips

    Supermom was fighting
    more fiercley than ever before
    Her archnemesis holding a shovel
    and the keys to her heart

    Supermom is resigning
    discarding superpowers
    The blessings of her body
    and the rich soil
    pushing her down
    a flower in unbloom




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      I hope you had this read at her funeral or posted it in the "In Memoriam" space of your daily paper. It is quite an eulogy to someone so dearly loved. I just lost my wife. She was a "Woman of the Hoe" also. A real farm girl.
    Come on , now, post more of your works.
    | Posted on 2008-05-02 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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