Right on Cue by 777sacrites777

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Submission Name: Right on Cue dots

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Author:	777sacrites777
ASL Info:	24/F/TX
Elite Ratio:	3.06 - 343/189/83
Words:	120

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	1270
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	776

Description:
ode to a former boyfriend.

Right on Cue dots

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I knew this was coming.
I promise it's nothing new.
I've been through this before...
you broke my heart right on cue.

But come on, hurt my feelings.
Please break my heart again.
Make me cry myself to sleep;
'cause I know what happens then...

nothing at all but profit
is headed my way.
I may be miserable now,
but tomorrow's another day.

And soon enough these tears
will pour out of my pen
onto paper that will make me famous,
and only you'll be crying when

I reap all the benefits
while you're left with pure regret.
With just a poem as a memory,
you I'll soon forget!

Submitted on 2008-05-01 17:29:45 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
hey this was great
probably one of the BEST send off poems I have ever read

the word choice was great

Congrats

sandman
| Posted on 2008-05-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.