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    dots Submission Name: Call Me Mud Pie Momdots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Nature
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    dotsCall Me Mud Pie Momdots
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    Just place me in a flowerbed
    with birds a-circling overhead;
    please add some sunshine and some rain
    to make this landscape my domain.
    Pink columbine and peony,
    some hostas growing 'round a tree
    can mingle with the marigolds
    acknowledging petunias bold.
    Bright rainbow colors, my delight,
    parade from dawn 'til dark of night.
    Do I need add another clue?
    I’m passionate about this view!
    But, best of all, when I survey,
    it seems the work is only play.
    These muddy knees and dirty hands…
    oh, yes, they’ve answered my demands
    because I’ve gained true happiness
    becoming such a dirty mess!





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      cool write - up, this one!

    Quite a cute one and unique........enjoyable and a thorough intoduction to nature; its very rare that one gets to explore nature now-a-days ...so this poem of yours provided your readers with a refreshing change.

    Short and sweet and nice indeed!
    | Posted on 2008-05-11 00:00:00 | by mdsouza | [ Reply to This ]
      he he he....how I know that feeling! I just loved this colorful piece and you really bring your joy through! When I was planting some foxgloves the other day I just loved getting my fingers and hands all muddy and really connecting with the plant and the ground. What blessings!

    Happy day with lots of love,peace,joy,abundance & smiles to share
    tif ~*~
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, Ron's right, it does "sing with merriment". It was incredibly descriptive, without lacking emotion. It seems like nobody ever writes about nature, and it's such an incredible thing.

    Very Good Write.

    Anna
    | Posted on 2008-05-02 00:00:00 | by Aethyx | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha! This is wonderful! It literally sings with merriment and the joy of working in mother earth, the out of doors; in, as was written in one of my poems "Gods Good Earth"!!!!

    And, there is no more satisfaction than to get to enjoy the wonderful colors that you have planted for all summer long! Those who haven't ever tried gardening and growing their own flowers don't know the joys they're missing!

    Another terriffic write, lovely lady!!!!!

    | Posted on 2008-05-01 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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