We're Gone

Author: danni_amazing ASL Info:    17/F/Pa Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 1 /3 /8 Words: 20

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We're Gone

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Like flowers in winter We die down Shriveling up like sun dried veggies Can we revive Will we ever Revive

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