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We're Gone
Author:
danni_amazing
ASL Info:
17/F/Pa
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20
Class/Type:
Poetry /Love
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Description:
A poem i <3
We're Gone
Like flowers in winter
We die down
Shriveling up like sun dried veggies
Can we revive
Will we ever
Revive
Submitted on 2008-05-01 19:55:24
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