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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 647/1072/602
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Answers: The first one is my dream, the third is you wont like this (so stay away from my words). I am resisting the urge to check the second one. I cant remember the title as easily as the other two.
    You did this at the worst possile moment. You always were a great friend.


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    You want me to respond eloquently
    With a folk song or a poem that would break your heart to bitter bits
    But I won't, not now, not after the things you said
    That would be too 'me' of me.

    So in the words of another Jack, Kerouac in fact,
    Okay.
    Quit.
    Mad.
    Stop.




    Submitted on 2008-05-02 02:03:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its a good thing that I read the list from the bottom up, or I would have gotten them out of order. Well done, I like the last for words.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2008-05-03 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      This was cool and i think it will stay with me for awhile

    the last four words have hit a point of interest

    well done as alwaz

    sandman
    | Posted on 2008-05-02 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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