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    dots Submission Name: As A Poetdots
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    Author: Bobby K
    Elite Ratio:    3.59 - 430/250/85
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 84
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    Description:
       A fun read for beginer's and old poets too.


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    dotsAs A Poetdots
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    You have the right to remain silent,
    If you give up that right.
    anything you say can and will be used
    in the court of public opinion.
    You have the right to use a keyboard,
    if you can not afford one,
    a pen with a piece of paper
    will be provided for you.
    (You may have to get it yourself)

    You have the right to speak like an Attorney,
    to take your readers on trip or a journey.
    giving them a feeling of anticipation.
    Using words out of context or connotation.
    or use long words like con-ver-sation.
    You have the right,
    to give your feelings a voice,
    to express yourself in every kind
    and category of poetry,
    or muster a musical group
    like the one called Floetry.

    You have the right to recite, Day or night,
    in front of a crowd, to speak out loud!
    to make yourself heard!
    with the freedom of the spoken word.
    To stand and proclaim, to entertain,
    or use the word to describe your pain!
    You, have the right to complain.
    Know that for you, No subject is Taboo.
    Only be aware of poor taste.
    Because what you say,
    can be thrown back in your face.




    Submitted on 2008-05-03 11:10:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      or use long words like con-ver-sation.

    I like that, made me think it was like talking to a hmmm not to intelligent person.

    It makes me see someone standing at a podium trying to rile poets up to speak for their rights or at least write for them

    Also thanks for the comment on Passionate?, it is nice to meet you as well.

    Vynom
    | Posted on 2008-08-03 00:00:00 | by PryncessVynom | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice poem. The rhyme scheme felt so flawless that it almost suggests that this was an official document. What i mean by that is, it appears this poem was made with intensive care and prepartion.

    I also agree with the statement the poem makes. A person should be able to write about something and not be bashed because of who they are personaly, but bashed over the content of the writing.

    Reminds me of a saying by MLK i beleive..
    "a man should not be judged by the color of his skin, but by the content of his character"
    | Posted on 2008-07-13 00:00:00 | by Bozly | [ Reply to This ]
      i am a dreadfully clumsy orator...lol

    i tend to stand there while helpless giggles erupt from my mouth. unless i had a beer first...one only, and a small glass at that. then i roar the poem out into the mic, demand accolades from the stunned audience (usually comprised of men, who haven't any idea how to respond to my grumpier feminazi-esque pieces beyond cupping their hands, all unbeknownst to themselves, over their genital area in their laps and smiling uncertainly at me...they have that look, the one you see when a man is slapped by a beautiful woman in public...you know, the urge to slap back, the round-eyed shock, and the polite and civil smile that says, "if we were alone just now...").



    | Posted on 2008-06-07 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, thanks for recomending it...it was a good read. I totally related. Yay!

    ~Carrie
    | Posted on 2008-05-24 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      haha...i think that you have it down the way it is
    "Know that for you, No subject is Taboo.
    Only be aware of poor taste.
    Because what you say,
    can be thrown back in your face." !
    this got to be one of the more entertaning pieces i read that make sense
    | Posted on 2008-05-11 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh wow, you keep suggesting these poems to me to read, and i have yet to be dissapointed. I love this. It was very enteraining, and the idea of the poem itself i love. 'Write out what you feel' ^_^.

    They only thing i have to say, is that some of it was a little weird. Like i love what you say in the first stanza and how you say it, but you go straight into rythming in the next two, it kinda through me off a little, but i still love it!!!! ^_^

    Keep up the amazing work ^_^

    Cry
    | Posted on 2008-05-08 00:00:00 | by WhY-dO-yOu-CrY | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, yes this is truly excellent; you should consider adding to the best of your works so far. I had not come across with such winding work is some time... almost good enough to be a classic.

    I wish this poem becomes far more popular.... may be I can build you a website and optimize it heavily... :)

    Appreciate this submission a lot.

    I am adding to my fav list by the way.
    | Posted on 2008-05-06 00:00:00 | by rawpot | [ Reply to This ]
      Excellent, Robert! I think all poets and writers will relate to this, and grin broadly!
    | Posted on 2008-05-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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